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回應:想像一個如此的生活

文章ellenmiia » 2005-04-04, 21:21

My Dear,

French people usually drink black coffee, only very few of them take coffee with cream or milk. "Latte" comes from Italy and I can gaurantee you that if you ask French people(in France, of course, not those who lived in Taiwan since they have traveled a little) most of them will not know what "Latte" or "Machiatto" are, Italy and France are two different countries although they are both in Europe, do not get mixed up.

Besides, the legend of Count Dracula comes from Romania, not France. Romania is a former communist country located in Eastern Europe, a country with long history, however it is still a different country from France, besides the two countries are very far away from each other.

You have mentioned the train station of Cezanne at Paris? I have never heard such a train station to be honest. Here is the list of all the train stations at Paris: Gare de Nord, Gare de Lyon(you have to depart from here if you want to go to PACA, Provence-Alps Cotes d'Azur, I think that's what you mean in your article about "south of France", actually it is only the South east of France, the other side we also have the Pyrennes and atlantic coast, and that's also south of France but totally different)Gare St. Lazare, Gare Austerliz, Gare Monparnasse, Gare de l'Est and some other train stations located in the suburbs. Maybe I have made a mistake but really I have never heard the one you wrote about. To go south you should take gare de Lyon or Gare Monparnasse.

I can understand you are probably a young lady who dreams about all the beautiful and romantic aspects of France, or Europe. But one thing really bothers me is that beyond the poetic phrases and imaginary contents, you don't seem to care too much about truth-that's a very bad habit if you want to be a good writer, since a writer should be someone intellectual, thus he or she should not talk about non sense, or make up what ever story that is too far away from the reality, other wise it only show that the person has a very poor cultural level. I suggest you to do some research before you are going to write about something that is not familiar to you. Writing well isn't that easy, indeed, it should not only be emotional but also intellectual. You haven't had enough historical, g&ographical, and cultural knowledge to write about France. Don't base your information on several writers' writings but get background knowledge from reliable sources. Personally I believe only when you have enough knowledge about one subject than you can develop emotions towards this subject. I am very strict, that's true, since I am tired about reading non sence from writers who don't even have enough intellegence and willingness to make more efforts.

At the end, I hope you can read English well enough, since I do not write very well in English.

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